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The table is giving us information about the consumer behaviour on different things, in five different countries in the year 2002, along the 5 different countries we can find Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and turkey.

The table is giving us information about the consumer behaviour on different things, in five different countries in the year 2002, along the 5 different countries we can find Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and turkey. doylP
According to the information on the table the percentage of national consumers at the foods, drinks and tobacco category, the highest is Turkey, having a 32. 14 percentage, while Sweden is the lowest of all the countries having a 15. 77%, almost half of what Turkey has. On the other hand as we observe the clothing and footwear numbers, all of the countries have similar numbers, Italy having the highest number, followed by Turkey, in spite of this Sweden is still the lowest in this category. Moving forward in the Leisure and education percentages, Spain takes the lowest place, leaving Sweden to the second highest percentage, while Turkey is the highest. As we can see the statistics show us how different each category is depending on the country.
According to the information on the table the
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of national consumers at the foods, drinks and tobacco category, the highest is Turkey, having a 32. 14
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, while Sweden is the lowest of all the countries having a 15. 77%, almost half of what Turkey has.

On the other hand
as we observe the clothing and footwear numbers,
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all of the
countries have similar numbers, Italy having the highest number, followed by Turkey,
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this Sweden is
still
the lowest in this category.

Moving forward in the Leisure and education
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, Spain takes the lowest place, leaving Sweden to the second highest
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, while Turkey is the highest.

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we can
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is depending
on the country.
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IELTS academic The table is giving us information about the consumer behaviour on different things, in five different countries in the year 2002, along the 5 different countries we can find Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and turkey.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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