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Spent and received money amount of Children's charity in 2016 located in USA

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The chart gives data on money sources and expenditures in 2016 of a children’s charity which located in the USA. Let us start with Revenue Sources’ chart with $53, 561, 580 total amount. Overall, Donated Food took 86. 6% part which means it overtook the received amount of money percentage. Followed by Community Contributions about 10. 4% and Program Revenue, number a fifth from Community Contribution. Investment Income and Government Grants noticeably saw as the least received amounts. We also can consider that they have exactly the same number of percentage, 0. 2% mentioned. The rest was from other income. Turning now to Expenditures’ chart. From the first look, we can conclude that this chart clearly displays the peak amount of spent was taken by Program Services. It was about 95. 8% from total expenditures. Other than that, this children’s charity also spent money for fundraising. The difference between number of Fundraising and Program Services was very steep. Fundraising only took about 2. 6% of amount followed by Management and General expense. They spent about $53, 224, 896 total for expenditures, almost equal to received money. However, this amount doesn’t exceed the total of Revenue Sources.

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