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The bar below shows the US top ten processed food export

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A glance at the bar graph provided revels the information about the food export markets in ten nation over the Span of seven years. The data has been calibrated into Billion US$Overall, it can be vividly manifested that, in all countries the amount of pervious year significant higher then six years ago, however last year the amount of Canada tops the list whereas Hong Kong and Australia Lower amount of food markets To begin with, Canada was the highest processed food export market it accounted for 13. 2 Billion US$ as well as rest of the world second highest, it amount 11. 0 Billion US$, however the lowest processed food export market was Hong Kong, Australia, china and Philippines by tiny fraction. Furthermore, looking forward the last six years ago it can be seen that the Canada as usual highest but the country like Australia and Hong Kong ratio down below 1 Billon US$ moreover, the data of Mexico second highest in the food export market
A glance at the bar graph provided revels the information about the
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of Canada tops the list whereas Hong Kong and Australia Lower
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markets To
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it accounted for 13. 2 Billion US$
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11. 0 Billion US$,
however
the lowest processed
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was Hong Kong, Australia, china and Philippines by tiny fraction.
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, looking forward the last six years ago it can be
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that the Canada as usual highest
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