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The diagram portrays the process of generating hydro-electric power.

The diagram portrays the process of generating hydro-electric power. APR5M

The diagram portrays the process of generating hydroelectric power. Overall, there are eight stages in the process beginning with Sun heating the surface of the water and culminating in the distribution of the energy. In the beginning, the light emitted by the Sun increases the temperature of the water. Heated water is then vaporized and form into moving clouds. Following this, the clouds start to move and fill up the dam’s reservoir by raining over it. When the reservoir is filled up the valve opens allowing the water to flow right in the direction of the turbine. After this, the turbine directs the torrent to the pump which returns the water back to the reservoir. This process is repeated several times prior to the turbine being able to send sufficient energy output to the high voltage cables. In the subsequent stage, the high voltage cables send the energy to the transformer station. Finally, energy is distributed among the buildings receiving this energy such as schools, hospitals, and factories via the set of underground cables

The diagram portrays the process of generating hydroelectric power.

Overall
, there are eight stages in the process beginning with Sun heating the surface of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 and culminating in the distribution of the energy.

In the beginning, the light emitted by the Sun increases the temperature of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
. Heated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 is then vaporized and form into moving clouds. Following this, the clouds This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 and fill up the dam’s reservoir by raining over it. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 the reservoir is filled
 up the valve opens allowing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 to flow right in the direction of the turbine. After this, the turbine directs the torrent to the pump which returns the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 back to the reservoir. This process is repeated
 several times prior to the turbine being able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 sufficient You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 output to the high voltage cables.

In the subsequent stage, the high voltage cables This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 to the transformer station. Finally
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
is distributed
 among the buildings receiving this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 such as schools, hospitals, and factories via the set of underground cables