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The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table indicates the proportion of expenditure on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. When we take a look at the table, we see countries have a number of fluctuations for various item. Some of them spend more money on Housing things for living, whilst others spend much more money enjoyable things The first country is France. French people spend their most money on housing with 31 % according to the given table. Food and drink has 25 %, clothing 7 %, and, entertainment has 13 % share among French people. The second country is Germany. German people also spend their most money on Housing, whereas Food and drink has 22 %, clothing has 15 %, and Entertainment has 19 % respectively. The third country is UK. Housing is the first item for spending most money on with 37 % by British people. Second item is Food and drink both with 27 %. Clothing and Entermaintent have 11 %. The fourth country is Turkey. Turkish people however, spend more money on Food and drink with 36 %. Housing has 20 %, Clothing has 12 % and, Entertainment has 10 %. The fifth and last country is Spain. Spanish people spend their most money on Food and drink based on the table. Housing has 18 %, Entertainment has 15 %, and, Clothing has 8 % respectively.
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food
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, housing, clothing and entertainment.

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, we
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of them
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on Housing things for living, whilst others
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much more
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enjoyable
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things


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first
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is France. French
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on housing with 31 % according to the
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.
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Food
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drink
has 25 %, clothing 7 %, and, entertainment has 13 % share among French
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people
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The second
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is Germany. German
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on Housing, whereas
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and
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has 22 %, clothing has 15 %, and Entertainment has 19 %
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The third
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is UK. Housing is the
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on with 37 % by British
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. Second item is
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both with 27 %. Clothing and
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have 11 %.

The fourth
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is Turkey. Turkish
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with 36 %. Housing has 20 %, Clothing has 12 % and, Entertainment has 10 %.

The fifth and last
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Spain. Spanish
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based on the
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. Housing has 18 %, Entertainment has 15 %, and, Clothing has 8 %
respectively
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.

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