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The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment Proportion of household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment Proportion of household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment 6WX3
The provided table describes the proportion of monthly household income five Europian countries spend on various items. The items are Food and drink, housing, clothing, entertainment. 31% of monthly income is spent on housing and the lowest was on entertainment. 22% on food and drink, 33% on housing, 15% of clothing, 19% on entertainment is spent in Germany. In UK, the highest amount is spent on food and drink(27%). The amount on clothing and entertainment were same in UK. The biggest 36% on food and drink and smallest 10% on entertainment in Turkey. 8% on clothing ia spent by Spain that is lower than food and drink(8%). It can be terminated that the highest amount is spent on housing by three European countries (France, Germany, UK). Spain spend the highest amount of income on food and drink rather than other items.
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, housing, clothing, entertainment. 31% of monthly income is
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on housing and the lowest was on entertainment. 22% on
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and
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, 33% on housing, 15% of clothing, 19% on entertainment is
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in Germany.

In UK, the highest
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. The
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on clothing and entertainment were same in UK. The biggest 36% on
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and smallest 10% on entertainment in Turkey.

8% on clothing
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on housing by three European countries (France, Germany, UK). Spain
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment Proportion of household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment

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