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The provided line graph illustrates the data of visitors exploring a Caribbean island from the year 2010 to the year 2017. It is measured in million.

The provided line graph illustrates the data of visitors exploring a Caribbean island from the year 2010 to the year 2017. It is measured in million. jAlL
The provided line graph illustrates the data of visitors exploring a Caribbean island from the year 2010 to the year 2017. It is measured in million. In the starting period, in 2010, no people stayed on a cruise ship, whereas 0. 5 million tourists were stayed on the island. However, in the year 2011, both scales were too close at 0. 5 million. What is more, scale was increased for those who stayed on cruise ship, which was 1 million, while another ratio was declined to 0 million. From the year 2013 to year 2015, quota for staying on the cruise ship was remained stable before climbed up slightly in the year 2013. Examining the sightseer who stayed on island, the ratio for them arose steadily and stood on 1 million. Moreover, only 1. 2 million people stayed on both, ships as well as on the island by the year 2016. And in 2017, both ratio was inclined again. Considering the total sightseers, that scale was rose dramatically and stood on 3. 5 million who visited and selected both options for staying. Overall, a number of tourist explored a Caribbean island and their population increased at the end of the period.
The provided line graph illustrates the data of visitors exploring a Caribbean
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tourists were
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, in the
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2011, both scales were too close at 0. 5
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on cruise
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ship
, which was 1
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million
, while another ratio
was declined
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million
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2013 to
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2015, quota for staying on the cruise
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2013. Examining the sightseer who
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2016. And in 2017, both ratio
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who visited and selected both options for staying.

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IELTS academic The provided line graph illustrates the data of visitors exploring a Caribbean island from the year 2010 to the year 2017. It is measured in million.

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