Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 comapred with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 comapred with 2015. P1qj
This chart shows the value of one country’s export in different categories during different years and on the other side, there is a percentage table which shows the difference between exports in 2016 and 2015. Here I am going to give detailed information about the company’s export earning during 2015 and 2016. Firstly, I am going to talk about year 2015 export earning, where petroleum products have earned more than 60 billion and Engineered goods earning is approximately 56 billion, moreover, gems and jewellery export earning is more than 40 billion in this year. In addition, agricultural products total income is approximately 31 billion and at last textiles have earned more 25 billion in this year. Secondly, in the year of 2016 export earning of petroleum product has increased by 3%, and engineered goods have increased in export income by 8. 5%, on the contrary, gems and jewellery have fall down by 5. 18% and it’s a big fall down in this year. On the other hand, agricultural products shown the smallest development in earning by 0. 81%, besides that there is a huge development in textiles earning have increased by 15. 24% and it is the highest change in the year of 2016. In conclusion, I have shown the difference of export earning between the year 2015 and 2016 which shows year 2016 is much better than 2015. There are numbers of increasement happened in earning as compared to 2015.
This chart
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
the value of one country’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
export
in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
categories during
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
years and on the other side, there is a percentage table which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
the difference between
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exports
in 2016 and 2015. Here I am going to give detailed information about the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
export
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earning
during 2015 and 2016.

Firstly
, I am going to talk about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
2015
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
export
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earning
, where petroleum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
have earned more than 60
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
and Engineered
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earning
is approximately 56
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
,
moreover
, gems and
Possible spelling mistake. 'jewellery' is British English.
jewellery
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
export
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earning
is more than 40
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
.
In addition
, agricultural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
total income is approximately 31
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
and at last textiles have earned more 25
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
billion
in this year.

Secondly
, in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
of 2016
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
export
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earning
of petroleum
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
has increased by 3%, and engineered
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
have increased in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
export
income by 8. 5%,
on the contrary
, gems and
Possible spelling mistake. 'jewellery' is British English.
jewellery
have fall down by 5. 18% and it’s a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
fall down in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
.
On the other hand
, agricultural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
shown the smallest development in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earning
by 0. 81%,
besides
that there is a huge development in textiles
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earning
have increased by 15. 24% and it is the highest
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
of 2016.

In conclusion
, I have shown the difference of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
export
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earning
between the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
2015 and 2016 which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
2016 is much better than 2015. There are numbers of
Possible spelling mistake found.
increasement
happened in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
earning
as compared to 2015.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 comapred with 2015.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
241 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 comapred with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.