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The maps below the happy valley shopping center in 1982 and 2012.

The maps below the happy valley shopping center in 1982 and 2012. gK5L

The maps illustrate information about how numerous alternatives that took place in the Happy Valley Shopping Center in two years (1982 and 2012). Overall, the area witnessed drastic changes throughout the period with the development of the themed restaurants and a parking lot. In 1982, the entertainment area was built at the center of the map. There were three stores namely sports, furniture and electronics. A lobby area was situated between toilets that were in the south west and a coffee shop which near of a food store. A lake was covered with certain trees and a path was running from west to east, end with a entrance. In 2012, the area of these shopping center had been expanded with a furniture retail. A parking lot had been built in the south west. A sports and electronics stores were constructing in north and the opposite to entertainment area. On the place of the furniture store, a food store was opened. There were no changes for toilets and elevator that used for 2nd floor.

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