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The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seville in 1980 and 2010

The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seville in 1980 and 2010 OGP3

Tha maps illustrate information about many changes which occurred in the coastal village of Seville in two years (1980 and 2010 ). Overall, the place witnessed drastic changes throughout the period with the development of a golf course, a restaurant, a retirement village and a boat club. In 1980, a holiday cottages were constructing near of the hotel and this areas were surrounding by a road. There was the area of the woodland in the north, the opposite of marsh. A river was between a east bank and sand dunes which was situated with a tea room. This village was built near of a sea. In 2010, a holiday cottages were replacing a permanent houses and a holiday cottages had been constructed next to the east bank. A tea room and sand dunes were demolishing for both a hotel and restaurant in south. There was also development with a golf course and a boat club. In the north, a retirement village was built and attached with a road.

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