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The table illustrates the distribution of global population between 1950 and 2000, with a forecast in 2050.

The table illustrates the distribution of global population between 1950 and 2000, with a forecast in 2050. 2XKM
The table illustrates the distribution of global population between 1950 and 2000, with a forecast in 2050. Overall, the most noticeable change was a drastic increase of the world population over 50 years and it is predicted to grow continuously over the next half-century. On the other hand, most of the population come from Asia while people who live in Oceania has the lowest percentage. The most significant change was the 2000’s world population which is more than twofold in 1950 from 2. 5 billion to 6. 0 billion and the population is predicted to rise to 9 billion over the next 50 years. Regarding the population distribution in 1950, nowhere compared to Asia with dominantly more than half of the percentage. Europe was the second most populated continent that constituted to 22 percent while Africa, Latin & North America are just below one-tenth and made up 9%, 6% and 7% respectively. After fifty years, Asia still was the most populated in the world and it increased by 4%. In the meanwhile, Africa became the second most populated which also rose by 4%. The proportion of the European population fell by 10%. Although Latin America was still below one-tenth but it jumped to 9% while North America reduced by 2%. Predicting the next half-century, only Africa’s population is forecast to grow over the next 50 years with an increase of 7%. The percentage of the rest of the areas are predicted to reduce. Asia will experience a drop by only 1%. Moreover, Europe and North America will continuously decline by 5% and 1% respectively. Latin America will remain constant. Finally, throughout the period from 1950 to 2050, Oceania has remained steady with the lowest percentage not over 1%.
The table illustrates the distribution of global
population
between 1950 and 2000, with a forecast in 2050.
Overall
, the most noticeable
change
was a drastic increase of the world
population
over
50 years and it
is predicted
to grow
continuously
over
the
next
half-century.
On the other hand
, most of the
population
come
from Asia while
people
who
live
in Oceania has the lowest
percentage
. The most significant
change
was the
2000’s
world
population
which is more than twofold in 1950 from 2. 5 billion to 6. 0 billion and the
population
is predicted
to rise to 9 billion
over
the
next
50 years. Regarding the
population
distribution in 1950, nowhere compared to Asia with
dominantly
more than half of the
percentage
. Europe was the second most populated continent that constituted to 22 percent while Africa, Latin & North America are
just
below one-tenth and made up 9%, 6% and 7%
respectively
.

After fifty years, Asia
still
was the most populated in the world and it increased by 4%. In the meanwhile, Africa became the second most populated which
also
rose by 4%. The proportion of the European
population
fell by 10%. Although Latin America was
still
below one-tenth
but
it jumped to 9% while North America
reduced
by 2%.

Predicting the
next
half-century,
only
Africa’s
population
is forecast to grow
over
the
next
50 years with an increase of 7%. The
percentage
of the rest of the areas
are predicted
to
reduce
. Asia will experience a drop by
only
1%.
Moreover
, Europe and North America will
continuously
decline by 5% and 1%
respectively
. Latin America will remain constant.
Finally
, throughout the period from 1950 to 2050, Oceania has remained steady with the lowest
percentage
not
over
1%.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the distribution of global population between 1950 and 2000, with a forecast in 2050.

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