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The table below gives information about the average annual spending of university students in three different countries

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The table shows the average percentage of money that college students of 3 countries spending each year on 5 different categories. Overall, it is clear that students in country A and B have larger annual expenditure and they spend most of their money on accomodation. The total spending of students in country A is highest, at 5000$ per year, following by students in country B and C who spend 4500$ and 1500$ per year respectively. In term of accomodation, students in country A and B spend the largest percentage of money on it, accounting for 45% and 35% respectively. This figure in country C is only 30%. Food accounts for the largest amount of money of students in country C, at 36% while students in country A and B spend 22% andh 28% on food respectively. In country A and B, students spend same proportion of money on leisure (22-23%) whereas, students in country C spend only 12% of their expenditure on it. In contrast, the average percentage of money spent on book of students in country C is 21%, much more higher than that of students in country A and B which are only 3% and 9% respectively. Students in all countries spend less than 10% of annual expenditure on other activities
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A and B have larger annual
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A and B
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the largest percentage of
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activities
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about the average annual spending of university students in three different countries

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