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The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. P8RK
The charts provide information about the spendings of local government in the year 2010 and 2015. The initial impression of the charts is that education is one of the biggest spent of money followed by healthcare with a slight decreased and pensions that remain stable percentage in both year. Transport and interest on borrowing slightly increased while welfare and culture and leisures decreased to half of their previous data followed by other remain the least expenditure. Looking at the first category which is the government expenditure in 2010 which was dominant by education with 24% of spendings which almost one fourth of the data followed by healthcare with 21% of spendings. Similarly, pensions and defence showed a slight difference with pensions (19%) whereas defence with 17% of spendings. The same condition goes to transport and interest of borrowing with only 3% of difference from both data as welfare dominated. Lastly, 6% of total expenditure are from transport with 3%, culture and leisure with a difference of 1% from welfare, and other with only 1% of spendings. Regarding the data from 2015 expenditure, education still remain the dominant spendings although there was a decreased of 3% from the previous data in 2010 as the same as healthcare with a decreased of 1% being the second category with the most spent of money. Pensions remain stable percentage in 19% while defence showed a slight decreased from 17% to 14%. Welfare and interest of borrowing increased while other categories decreased to 1% each.
The charts provide information about the
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spendings
of local
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government
in the year 2010 and 2015. The initial impression of the charts is that education is one of the biggest spent of money followed by healthcare with a slight
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decreased
and
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pensions
that
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remain
stable percentage in both year. Transport and interest on borrowing
slightly
increased while
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welfare
and culture and
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leisures
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decreased
to half of their previous
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data
followed by other
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remain
the least expenditure.

Looking at the
first
category which is the
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government
expenditure in 2010 which was dominant by education with 24% of
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spendings
which almost one fourth of the
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data
followed by healthcare with 21% of
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spendings
.
Similarly
,
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pensions
and
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defence
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showed
a slight difference with
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pensions
(19%) whereas
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defence
with 17% of
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spendings
. The same condition goes to transport and interest of borrowing with
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only
3% of difference from both
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data
as
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welfare
dominated.
Lastly
, 6% of total expenditure are from transport with 3%, culture and leisure with a difference of 1% from
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welfare
, and other with
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only
1% of
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spendings
.

Regarding the
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data
from 2015 expenditure, education
still
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remain
the dominant
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spendings
although there was a
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decreased
of 3% from the previous
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data
in 2010 as the same as healthcare with a
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decreased
of 1% being the second category with the most spent of money.
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Pensions
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remain
stable percentage in 19% while
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defence
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showed
a slight
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decreased
from 17% to 14%.
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Welfare
and interest of borrowing increased while other categories
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decreased
to 1% each.

IELTS academic The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015.

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