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THE PROCESS OF MAKING CHERRY JAM

THE PROCESS OF MAKING CHERRY JAM ELQVD
The illustrations demonstrate various stages involved in the fabrication of making cherry jam. As is shown by the diagrams, it is apparent that there are nine main steps in the process of making cherry jam, which commences with the cherries are obtained by shaking the trees and terminates with labeled jars. At the first stage of the process, a sheet is unwound on the ground surface and the tree is oscillated to acquire the cherries. In the subsequent step, the cherries are gathered and conveyed to the processing plant. After that, the leaves and stems are relocated. Then the cherries are clarified with water. Subsequently, the stone is removed from the middle of the cherry. The process continue with cooking the cherries and adding supplementary ingredients. After being cooked, they appraise the quality of the jams. In the next stage, the jam is poured into jars. Finally, a label is cohered on the jars.
The illustrations demonstrate various stages involved in the fabrication of making cherry jam.

As
is shown
by the diagrams, it is apparent that there are nine main steps in the process of making cherry jam, which commences with the
cherries
are obtained
by shaking the trees and terminates with labeled jars.

At the
first
stage of the process, a sheet is unwound on the ground surface and the tree
is oscillated
to acquire the
cherries
. In the subsequent step, the
cherries
are gathered
and conveyed to the processing plant. After that, the
leaves
and stems
are relocated
. Then the
cherries
are clarified
with water.

Subsequently
, the stone
is removed
from the middle of the cherry. The process continue with cooking the
cherries
and adding supplementary ingredients. After
being cooked
, they appraise the quality of the jams. In the
next
stage, the jam
is poured
into jars.
Finally
, a label
is cohered
on the jars.
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IELTS academic THE PROCESS OF MAKING CHERRY JAM

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154 words
7.0
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