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Population in china and india in 2000 and 2050

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The provided line graph compares the number of people in two countries india and China in 2000 and is predicted this trend of growth until 2050. It is clear from graph that the number of people in India over the period shown increased steadily whearse about china this trend is inverse and it moderately declined. In 2000, population in India was 1 billion which was less than china, growth of population increased steadily until 2050 and reach to 1. 6 that is predicted in 2050 population in India became more than china. Between 2000 and 2030 population of china from 1. 25 went up to 1. 45 that in this year china will have the same population with india, after 2030 the trend of growth moderately declined to 1. 4.
The provided line graph compares the number of
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in two countries
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india
and China in 2000 and
is predicted
this trend of growth until 2050.

It is
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clear
from graph that the number of
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people
in India over the period shown increased
steadily
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whearse
about china this trend is inverse and it
moderately
declined.

In 2000,
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population
in India was 1 billion which was less than china, growth of
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population
increased
steadily
until 2050 and reach to 1. 6 that
is predicted
in 2050
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population
in India became more than china.

Between 2000 and 2030
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of china from 1. 25 went up to 1. 45 that in this year china will have the same
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population
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india
, after 2030 the trend of growth
moderately
declined to 1. 4.
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