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The table illustrates how the proportion of people aged over 65 in Canada, Germany and UK was in 1988 and 2000 and how it will change in 2030.

The table illustrates how the proportion of people aged over 65 in Canada, Germany and UK was in 1988 and 2000 and how it will change in 2030. J3LkB
The table illustrates how the proportion of people aged over 65 in Canada, Germany and UK was in 1988 and 2000 and how it will change in 2030. Overall, Germany had the highest proportion among all three countries. The lowest percentage can be seen in UK. In Canada, it can be seen that there is an increase of around 10% of its aged population from 1988 to 2030. The lowest increase in proportion which is around 6% is in UK. From 1988 to 2000, UK did not demonstrate a significant change in its 65 aged population. However, UK is predicted to increase its aging population over 65 to 20. 35% in 2030 which is around 5% increase from its value in 2000.
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in UK. In Canada, it can be
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of around 10% of its aged population from 1988 to 2030. The lowest
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in proportion which is around 6% is in UK. From 1988 to 2000, UK did not demonstrate a significant
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its aging population over 65 to 20. 35% in 2030 which is around 5%
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IELTS academic The table illustrates how the proportion of people aged over 65 in Canada, Germany and UK was in 1988 and 2000 and how it will change in 2030.

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