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Most news has not conection with most pepole's live. So it's a waste of time for most uf us to read newspapers and watch new programs.

Most news has not conection with most pepole's live. So it's a waste of time for most uf us to read newspapers and watch new programs. 3Wx2b
At the present time, there is extensive notice within the common society of whether Most news has not conection with most pepole's live. So it's a waste of time for most uf us to read newspapers and watch new programs. On the contary in my mind, I entirely believe that Most new have conection with most pepole's live it's not a waste of time for most uf us to read newspapers and watch new programs the following cases and examples will assist to support my view point. First of all, I disagree for most news has not conection with most pepole's live. So it's a waste of time for most uf us to read newspapers and watch new programs as a resault that ideas in not true in living people's live for example if the news have not to connection people live int is not good for people. On the other hand, that most new have conection with most pepole's live it's not a waste of time for most uf us to read newspapers and watch new programs for this reason nowaday most news and other news have signiificant to connection eveything in the world such as covid 19 news important to people live now. To sum up, although my piont of view has a reason for support, it is arduous to presuade everyone to share mt viewpoint. However, I perfectly agree that that most new have conection with most pepole's live it's not a waste of time for most uf us to read newspapers and watch new programs. The cases and examples were mentioned above supportd my point of view excellently.
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the following cases and examples will assist to support my view point.

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IELTS academic Most news has not conection with most pepole's live. So it's a waste of time for most uf us to read newspapers and watch new programs.

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