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The line graph show data about the percentage of people who own the devices from 2010 to 2025. It is clear that the percentage of devices's users has increased from 2010 to 2015. In the next 10 years, we can see a period of volatility. Laptops had the highest percentage of users from 2010 to 2015 but from 2015 onwards, the number of users has decreased and it is expected that by 2025 the percentage of users will be lower than 2010. The number of people using smartphones and tablets increased sharply from 2010 to 2020. It is expected that by 2025, the percentage of phone users will continue to go up, but the number of tablet users will decrease slightly. In 2010, smart watches were not used but within 15 years, the number of users increased significantly but still less than the remaining 3 devices. It is expected that by 2025, the number of people using mobile phones will account for the highest proportion, followed by laptops, tablets and smart watches.
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data about the
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people
who
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the devices from 2010 to 2025. It is
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that the
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devices's
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users
has increased from 2010 to 2015. In the
next
10 years, we can
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see
a period of volatility. Laptops had the highest
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percentage
of
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users
from 2010 to 2015
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but
from 2015 onwards, the
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number
of
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users
has decreased and it is
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expected
that by 2025 the
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percentage
of
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users
will be lower than 2010. The
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number
of
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people
using smartphones and tablets increased
sharply
from 2010 to 2020. It is
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expected
that by 2025, the
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percentage
of phone
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users
will continue to go up,
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but
the
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of tablet
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will decrease
slightly
. In 2010, smart
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watches
were not
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used
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within 15 years, the
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users
increased
significantly
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but
still
less than the remaining 3 devices. It is
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expected
that by 2025, the
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of
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using mobile phones will account for the highest proportion, followed by laptops, tablets and smart
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IELTS academic describe the changes/ movement of data

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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