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The charts below show the number of reasons why some people leave UK and why some people choose to stay.

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The pie charts present a variety of reasons to explain what makes some people stay in the UK and what causes others leave UK. The majority reason that people leave UK is the quality of life, while 40% of the people chose to stay in UK for the same reason. The second major reason that people leave UK is 12% lower than the first one----there are 22% people leave UK because of the weather. It is followed by the financial resources, which as the reason that 20% people leave UK. Meanwhile, 15% leaving people leave because of the situation of employment, which 6% higher than the reason that leaving UK to join their families and friends. Except for the quality of life, those who chose to stay in UK also heavily reliant upon the financial resources, which 13% higher than the situation of employment that holds 13% of all staying people. Only 10% people choose to stay as a result of join family and friends, while only 7% like the weather in UK.
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UK is the quality of life, while 40% of the
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UK is 12% lower than the
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UK. Meanwhile, 15% leaving
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IELTS academic The charts below show the number of reasons why some people leave UK and why some people choose to stay.

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