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The table below shows the amount of money a single person and a couple in UK need for a convenient life after they get retired

The table below shows the amount of money a single person and a couple in UK need for a convenient life after they get retired eAeJB
The table illustrates the budgets needed of elderly single person and couples to live in UK. In general, they spend the money for a convenient life after getting retired. Taking the housing, resigned single people spend at $ 184, which was at $10 lower than couples. Single retires reached at $140 on leisure activities, whereas couples had the money at $202. In addition, couple had the highest result in data. Turning to the health, retired couple was the higher result in data than single person. Regarding the transport, a retired single person gained the money at $107 and merely over $108 for couple retires. Concerning the clothing, elderly single person got the lower money at $44 than elderly couple in UK. Furthermore, it was the lower earnings for a retired single person than the other expense. In the terms of food, resigned couple had the income at $100. It represented the survey result from data at $50 for a single person. In summary, the average budget of retired single person is much lower than couple. While housing have the biggest expenses for single retirees, retired couples need a lot of money for their free activities.
The table illustrates the budgets needed of elderly
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to
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live
in UK.
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, they spend the
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money
for a convenient life after getting retired.

Taking the housing, resigned
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single
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people
spend at
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$ 184
, which was at $10 lower than
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couples
.
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Single
retires reached at $140 on leisure activities, whereas
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couples
had the
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money
at $202.
In addition
,
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couple
had the highest result in data. Turning to the health,
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retired
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couple
was the higher result in data than
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single
person.

Regarding the transport, a
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retired
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single
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person
gained the
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money
at $107 and
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over $108 for
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couple
retires. Concerning the clothing, elderly
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single
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person
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the lower
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money
at $44 than elderly
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couple
in UK.
Furthermore
, it was the lower earnings for a
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retired
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single
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person
than the other expense. In the terms of food, resigned
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couple
had the income at $100. It represented the survey result from data at $50 for a
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single
person.

In summary, the average budget of
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retired
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single
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person
is much lower than
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couple
. While housing have the biggest expenses for
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single
retirees,
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retired
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couples
need
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money
for their free activities.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the amount of money a single person and a couple in UK need for a convenient life after they get retired

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