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The table gives information about the number of mobile phones (Nokia,Ericsson,Samsung,Motorola,Apple) purchased by people from 2006 to 2012. The data was calculated in millions.

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The table gives information about the number of mobile phones (Nokia, Ericsson, Samsung, Motorola, Apple) purchased by people from 2006 to 2012. The data was calculated in millions. Nokia had the highest sales among other brands in the mentioned period. Nokia sales increased slightly until 2012 from 345 to422 and it decreased in 2012 to 335. Ericsson mobile phones had sharply risen in the number of sales from 2006 to 2007 from 74 to 102. However, the sales dropped gradually from 2007 to 2012( respectfully from 102-28). Sales of Samsung had gradually increased in 2006 to 2012(from 117-396. 5). There was a steady decrease from 210 to 28 in the expenditure of motorola phones from 2006 to 2012. although, There isn't any data about Apple's sales in 2012, generally it had an increasing trend from 2007until 2011 and it suddenly decreased from 89 to135. 8. Overall, NOkia had the highest sales and Apple had the lowest, among five brands during these seven years. Purchases in Nokia and Samsung had increasing trends as compared to Ericsson, Motorola and apple.
The table gives information about the number of mobile phones (Nokia, Ericsson, Samsung, Motorola, Apple)
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from 2006 to 2012. The data
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among other brands in the mentioned period. Nokia
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increased
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from 2006 to 2007 from 74 to 102.
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dropped
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in 2012,
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suddenly
decreased from 89 to135. 8.

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and Apple had the lowest, among five brands during these seven years.
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in Nokia and Samsung had increasing trends as compared to Ericsson, Motorola and apple.
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