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The table gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012, and 2014.

The table gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012, and 2014. awGVY
The table offers an account of 100000s' of registrations and the percentage changes for the same in 5 types of vehicles in Australia in the selected years. Analyzing the data for 2010, it is evident that there were 11. 8 million passenger vehicles registered, and the number was nearly five times higher than that of commercial vehicles at 2. 3 million. The number of motorcycles and heavy trucks was lower at only 540000 and 384000 while the figure relating to light trucks was lowest with just above 100000 vehicles registered. Over the next 4 years, the number of passenger vehicles and commercial vehicles grew to 13 million and 2. 7 million respectively. During the same period, the figure for motorcycles and light trucks surged dramatically by 30. 8% and 23. 5% respectively. In contrast, the number of heavy trucks exhibited the smallest rise of 8. 3% to 416000 vehicles registered. Overall, it can be seen that the number of all 5 types of transport mode was increased over the mentioned time and also the number of passenger vehicles was the highest, whereas the registration of motorcycles saw the most remarkable climb in these years.
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changes
for the same in 5 types of
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vehicles
in Australia in the selected years.

Analyzing the data for 2010, it is evident that there were 11. 8
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million
passenger
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vehicles
registered, and the
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number
was
nearly
five times higher than that of commercial
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vehicles
at 2. 3
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million
. The
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number
of motorcycles and heavy
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trucks
was lower at
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only
540000 and 384000 while the figure relating to light
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trucks
was lowest with
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just
above 100000
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vehicles
registered.

Over the
next
4 years, the
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number
of passenger
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vehicles
and commercial
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vehicles
grew to 13
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million
and 2. 7
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million
respectively
. During the same period, the figure for motorcycles and light
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trucks
surged
dramatically
by 30. 8% and 23. 5%
respectively
.
In contrast
, the
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number
of heavy
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trucks
exhibited the smallest rise of 8. 3% to 416000
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vehicles
registered.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the
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number
of all 5 types of transport mode
was increased
over the mentioned time and
also
the
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number
of passenger
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vehicles
was the highest, whereas the registration of motorcycles
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saw
the most remarkable climb in these years.

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