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Extinctions of plants and animal species in tropical forests have increased in the last century, and in the long run, animals and plants are going to face a massive extinction, with almost 50, 000 p/m species extinction. There has been an investigation regarding how in the next decades to come animals and plants species are going to disappear. It is estimated that, starting un 2020 the extinction is going to be catastrophical, and in 2060 the world will lose 50, 000 species of wildlife. Besides, animals and plants face the inevitable threat of human impact. Humans have already caused the extinction of millions of species, and it is projected to cause more and more due to agriculture, harvesting, etc. In conclusion, with the information gathered from the chart and causes being explained on why mass extinctions are happening, human beings have to modify and re-restructure their way of living to prevent massive extinctions.
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face the inevitable threat of human impact. Humans have already caused the
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of millions of species, and it
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IELTS academic extinction of plants and tropical species

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4 paragraphs
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6.0
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