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the chart below shows the percenmtage of people who ate fruits and vegetables per day in the UK between 2001 and 2008

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India's healthcare spending, including both private and public, has been around 3. 6% of GDP for the past six years, the lowest percentage in the five Brics countries: Brazil spent the most at 9. 2%, followed by South Africa at 8. 1%, Russia at 5. 3% and China at 5% in 2018. Developed nations spend a far higher proportion of their GDP on health. In 2018, for instance, spending in the US was 16. 9% and Germany 11. 2%. Even smaller nations like Sri Lanka (3. 76%) and Thailand (3. 79%) spend more than India. And India has fewer than 10 doctors per 10, 000 people, and in some states the figure is less than five.
India's healthcare spending, including both private and public, has been around 3. 6% of GDP for the past six years, the lowest percentage in the five
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countries: Brazil spent the most at 9. 2%, followed by South Africa at 8. 1%, Russia at 5. 3% and China at 5% in 2018.

Developed nations spend a far higher proportion of their GDP on health. In 2018,
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, spending in the US was 16. 9% and Germany 11. 2%. Even smaller nations like Sri Lanka (3. 76%) and Thailand (3. 79%) spend more than India.

And India has fewer than 10 doctors per 10, 000
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states the figure is less than five.

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