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The table gives information about European people of different age groups who went to gym once a month or more. Describe and summarize key points.

The table gives information about European people of different age groups who went to gym once a month or more. Describe and summarize key points. AJgol
The line chart illustrate the frequence of peple between 18 to 53 went to do sports in a gym in Europe for a period time of 20 years. Over all, the group of people from 24 to 33 shows the highest monthly attendency in the gym. While people aged 44 to 53 are the group which shows the lowest attendancy in gym every month. The groups of the youngest people investigated aged between 18 to 23 and the elder between 34 to 43 always ranked 2 and 3 among the 20 years. It was in 2002 that the two figures for monthly visit of gym of 24-33 aged group and 18-23 aged group were the most close, 19% and 20% represently. It shows the same incresing trend of group(18-23) and group(24-33) that more and more people chose to went to gym once a month or more frequently from 1990 to 2010. While the oldest group(44- 53) in the investigation incresed slowly.
The line chart illustrate the
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frequence
of
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peple
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between 18 to 53
went to do sports in a
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gym
in Europe for a period time of 20 years.

Over all, the
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group
of
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people
from 24 to 33
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shows
the highest monthly
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attendency
in the
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gym
.
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While
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people
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aged
44 to 53 are the
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group
which
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shows
the lowest
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attendancy
in
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gym
every month.

The
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groups
of the youngest
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people
investigated
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aged
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between 18 to 23
and the elder
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between 34 to 43
always ranked 2 and 3 among the 20 years. It was in 2002 that the two figures for monthly visit of
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gym
of 24-33
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aged
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group
and 18-23
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aged
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group
were
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the most close
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represently
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It
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shows
the same
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incresing
trend of
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group(18-23)
and
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group(24-33)
that more and more
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people
chose to went to
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gym
once a month or more
frequently
from 1990 to 2010. While the oldest group(
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44- 53
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incresed
slowly
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IELTS academic The table gives information about European people of different age groups who went to gym once a month or more. Describe and summarize key points.

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