Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The table gives information about Alcohol-Related deaths 2005 and Beers consumption per capita 2002 (litres).

The table gives information about Alcohol-Related deaths 2005 and Beers consumption per capita 2002 (litres). Badew

The yielded table reveals the number of seven different countries citizens who died because of alcohol in 2005, divided into the male and female category as well capita wise consumption of beers in 2002, measured unit was liters. Overall, the Czech Republic had the most beer consumption, and death rates were also higher than others; the least death numbers were in Lithuania, and the lowest beer usage was in Canada. Furthermore, alcohol-related deaths rates were higher in males than women. In Germany, 107 liters of beer were used, and over 1 million people died. Among them, 200000 people gender was female and remained male. In Canada and Ireland total number of citizens’ death numbers was roughly the same, although the male number was higher in Canada. The usage of beers was 86 and 104 liters, respectively. For the Czech Republic, 132 liter of beer consumed by locals and 900000 men, 486000 women died for it. For Lithuania, alcohol-related deaths number was 125000 and among 13000 was female and rest of male. However, 91 liters were used. For Australia, just below a 1 million citizen died due to alcohol and 73% among was male and 130000 was female. Beer usage was only 1 liter less than Germany. For Estonia, 98 liters of beer consumed per capita, 332000 males died among 383000 deaths and remained female.

The yielded table reveals the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of seven This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 countries citizens who You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrownexpireperishsuccumb
died
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of alcohol in 2005, divided into the male and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
 category as well
Possible spelling mistake found.capitalca pita
capita
 wise consumption of beers in 2002, measured unit was liters.

Overall
, the Czech Republic had the most beer consumption, and death rates were also
 higher than others; the least death You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
 were in Lithuania, and the lowest beer usage was in Canada. Furthermore
, alcohol-related deaths rates were higher in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboyguyfather
males
 than women.

In Germany, 107 liters of beer were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
, and over 1 million This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrownexpireperishsuccumb
died
. Among them, 200000 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 gender was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
 and remained male. In Canada and Ireland total You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of citizens’ death You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
 was roughly the same, although the male You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 was higher in Canada. The usage of beers was 86 and 104 liters, respectively
. For the Czech Republic, 132 liter of beer consumed by locals and 900000 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
, 486000 women You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrownexpireperishsuccumb
died
 for it. For Lithuania, alcohol-related deaths You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 was 125000 and among 13000 was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
 and rest of male. However
, 91 liters were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
.

For Australia, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 below a 1 million Possible agreement error. The noun 'citizen' seems to be countable, so consider using: "citizens".citizens
citizen
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrownexpireperishsuccumb
died
 due to alcohol and 73% among was male and 130000 was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
. Beer usage was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 1 liter less than Germany. For Estonia, 98 liters of beer consumed per capita, 332000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboyguyfather
males
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrownexpireperishsuccumb
died
 among 383000 deaths and remained You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
. 