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The table give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person per year in different countries.

The given tables provide information about the quantities of beer and fruit juice consumed per person annually in different countries around the world. overall, it can be seen that the amount of beer consumption was larger than fruit juice in all countries. Turning to the detail, Ireland supplied the highest number of beer consumption by 155 litres per person. followed by the second highest figure was in Germany reached 119 litres. however, the remaining seven didn’t reach 100 litres threshold ranking from 98 litres in Belgium and Denmark to 79 in Finland. As for fruit juice, canadians consumed the highest amount of fruit juice by 52. 6 litres. furthermore, five countries consumed the same average of 33-38 litres of fruit juice which were germany, austria, sweden, Australia and finland. however, new zealand had the least quantity of fruit juice by 24. 8 litres per person annually.
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that the amount of beer consumption was larger than
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fruit
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in all countries.

Turning to the detail, Ireland supplied the highest number of beer consumption by 155 litres per person. followed by the second highest figure was in Germany reached 119 litres.
however
, the remaining seven didn’t reach 100 litres threshold ranking from 98 litres in Belgium and Denmark to 79 in Finland.

As for
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fruit
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juice
, canadians consumed the highest amount of
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fruit
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juice
by 52. 6 litres.
furthermore
, five countries consumed the same average of 33-38 litres of
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fruit
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juice
which were germany, austria, sweden, Australia and finland.
however
, new zealand had the least quantity of
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fruit
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juice
by 24. 8 litres per person
annually
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IELTS academic The table give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person per year in different countries.

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