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The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and year after It was refurbished. The charts showed a result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and year after It was refurbished. The charts showed a result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. 855Wr
The table demonstrates the amount of sightseer to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the following year after it was renovated. The chart illustrates the outcome of a pole asking visitants how they were pleased with their visit through out same two periods. Overall, number of visitors increased slightly after it was renovated, most number of visitants are very dissatisfied with Museum after renovation, but ratio of visitors who satisfied after paying visit to Museum is rose markedly compare to the year before refurbishment. 74000 visitants had paid visit to Ashdown Museum during the year prior to restoration, while, the numbers increased by 18000 in the following year of regeneration of Museum. In the result of survey, a year before refurbishment, nearly 40% of visitors are dissatisfied with Museum, On the contrary, the number dropped dramatically and reduced to 15% after renovation. Similarly, only 10% of visitants were satisfied with the visit before the restoration, after the renovation the numbers reduced to half. Same amount of visitors have not submitted their response about Museum renovation which is 5% before and after it was renovated. The percentage grew significantly from 15% to 35% in visitors who were very satisfied with the restoration, correspondingly, the percentage jumped slightly from 30% to 40% of people who were very dissatisfied after paying visit.
The table demonstrates the amount of sightseer to
Ashdown
Museum
during the
year
before
and the following
year
after it
was renovated
. The chart illustrates the outcome of a pole asking visitants how they were
pleased
with their
visit
through out
same two periods.
Overall
,
number
of
visitors
increased
slightly
after it
was renovated
, most
number
of visitants are
very
dissatisfied with
Museum
after
renovation
,
but
ratio of
visitors
who satisfied after paying
visit
to
Museum
is rose
markedly
compare to the
year
before
refurbishment.

74000 visitants had paid
visit
to
Ashdown
Museum
during the
year
prior to restoration, while, the
numbers
increased by 18000 in the following
year
of regeneration of
Museum
. In the result of survey, a
year
before
refurbishment,
nearly
40% of
visitors
are dissatisfied
with
Museum
,
On the contrary
, the
number
dropped
dramatically
and
reduced
to 15% after
renovation
.
Similarly
,
only
10% of visitants
were satisfied
with the
visit
before
the restoration, after the
renovation
the
numbers
reduced
to half. Same amount of
visitors
have not submitted their response about
Museum
renovation
which is 5%
before
and after it
was renovated
. The percentage grew
significantly
from 15% to 35% in
visitors
who were
very
satisfied with the restoration,
correspondingly
, the percentage jumped
slightly
from 30% to 40% of
people
who were
very
dissatisfied after paying
visit
.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and year after It was refurbished. The charts showed a result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

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