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The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and year after It was refurbished. The charts showed a result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and year after It was refurbished. The charts showed a result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. 855Wr
The table demonstrates the amount of sightseer to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the following year after it was renovated. The chart illustrates the outcome of a pole asking visitants how they were pleased with their visit through out same two periods. Overall, number of visitors increased slightly after it was renovated, most number of visitants are very dissatisfied with Museum after renovation, but ratio of visitors who satisfied after paying visit to Museum is rose markedly compare to the year before refurbishment. 74000 visitants had paid visit to Ashdown Museum during the year prior to restoration, while, the numbers increased by 18000 in the following year of regeneration of Museum. In the result of survey, a year before refurbishment, nearly 40% of visitors are dissatisfied with Museum, On the contrary, the number dropped dramatically and reduced to 15% after renovation. Similarly, only 10% of visitants were satisfied with the visit before the restoration, after the renovation the numbers reduced to half. Same amount of visitors have not submitted their response about Museum renovation which is 5% before and after it was renovated. The percentage grew significantly from 15% to 35% in visitors who were very satisfied with the restoration, correspondingly, the percentage jumped slightly from 30% to 40% of people who were very dissatisfied after paying visit.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and year after It was refurbished. The charts showed a result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

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