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The table displays important information on the demographics of China, Russia, the US, and the UK.

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The table displays important information on the demographics of China, Russia, the US, and the UK. Overall, China has the largest population in the four nations, but has the lowest GDP per capita. The United States of America has the highest GDP, while the United Kingdom has the most average life expectancy. China has the highest population of around 1. 4 billion and an average life expectancy of 75. 2, but its GDP is the least in all nations of just under seven thousand dollars. The United States has the biggest GDP per capita of nearly $54 million, and its population is the second highest of nearly 319 million, the average life expectancy is the lowest in all countries of only 69. 2. The men and women in the United Kingdom have the highest average life expectancy of 81. 5 and have a modest amount of GDP per capita of nearly $42 million. Russia placed second to the lowest in all countries, having a population of almost 144 million, GDP per capita of just under $15 million, and an average life expectancy of 72. 3.
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has the lowest GDP per capita. The
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States of America has the highest GDP, while the
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Kingdom has the most
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expectancy.

China has the highest
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of around 1. 4 billion and an
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expectancy of 75. 2,
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its GDP is the least in all nations of
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under seven thousand dollars. The
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States has the biggest GDP per capita of
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expectancy is the lowest in all countries of
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expectancy of 81. 5 and have a modest amount of GDP per capita of
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. Russia placed second to the lowest in all countries, having a
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of almost 144
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expectancy of 72. 3.
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