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The supplied table gives information about monthly sales of various drinks at a small cafe from January to April months.

The supplied table gives information about monthly sales of various drinks at a small cafe from January to April months. 3aW05
The supplied table gives information about monthly sales of various drinks at a small cafe from January to April months. Overall it can be seen from the table that, the sale range in terms of all of the drinks was the highest in April compared to the other months and people more preferred to drink tea and coffee rather than the remaining types of drinks during the given period. The sale starts on January with revenue 150 dollars for the ice drinks and 250$ for tea and coffee which is more than about 40% of revenue realised during the month. In January the cocktails revenue seems to be showing a declining trend with $ 90. While in February the figure for revenue of ice drinks and cocktails remained the same with 150$ and 90$ respectively. We can observe a slight increase in tea and coffee sales by 20$. On the other hand revenue during March did not experience a significant change. Juice was favored by the majority of people with the highest rate, 210$. Showing an increase on March ice drinks rose to 190$. Looking at April, the figure for the revenue of ice drinks hit the highest point with 230$, whereas the sale of cocktail drinks were approximately halved (100$) comparing with ice drinks. Tea and coffee was drunk a bit fewer with the revenue 180$ rather than other months.
The supplied table gives information about monthly
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sales
of various
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drinks
at a
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small
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cafe
from January to April months.

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it can be
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seen
from the table that, the
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sale
range in terms of
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all of the
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drinks
was the highest in April compared to the other months and
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people
more preferred to
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drink
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tea
and
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coffee
rather
than the remaining types of
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drinks
during the
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given
period.

The
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sale
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starts
on January with
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revenue
150 dollars for the ice
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drinks
and
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250$
for
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tea
and
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coffee
which is more than about 40% of
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revenue
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realised
during the month. In January the
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cocktails
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revenue
seems to be showing a declining trend with
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$ 90
. While in February the figure for
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revenue
of ice
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drinks
and cocktails remained the same with
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150$
and
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90$
respectively
. We can observe a slight increase in
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tea
and
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coffee
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sales
by
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20$
.

On the other hand
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revenue
during March did not experience a significant
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change
. Juice
was favored
by the majority of
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people
with the highest rate,
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210$
. Showing an increase on March ice
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drinks
rose to
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190$
. Looking at April, the figure for the
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revenue
of ice
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drinks
hit the highest point with
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230$
, whereas the
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sale
of cocktail
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drinks
were approximately halved (
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100$
) comparing with ice
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drinks
.
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Tea
and
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coffee
was drunk
a bit fewer with the
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revenue
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$180".
180$
rather
than other months.
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IELTS academic The supplied table gives information about monthly sales of various drinks at a small cafe from January to April months.

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