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The table depicts the data about the quantity of Asia elephants in 9 countries over the period 1997 to 2004

The table depicts the data about the quantity of Asia elephants in 9 countries over the period 1997 to 2004. In general, it can be seen that the largest number of elephants was belong to India. It is clear that, in 1997, India had the largest number of elephants with 10. 000. The second largest number with 5500 elephants in Myanmar. In 2004, India had a decrease in the number of elephants to 7500 elephants, while this number increased to 1000, 5000 and 1000 elephants in Malaysia, Myanmar and Thailand respectively. Afterwards. Cambodia was the only country, which was the number of elephants increased in 2004 year around 1400 elephants. Chine had the least number of elephants a thousand only and the decreased to half of that in seven years.
The table depicts the data about the quantity of Asia
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in 9 countries over the period 1997 to 2004.
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that the largest
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number
of
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elephants
was
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that, in 1997, India had the largest
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number
of
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with 10. 000. The second largest
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with 5500
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in Myanmar. In 2004, India had a decrease in the
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number
of
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to 7500
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, while this
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number
increased to 1000, 5000 and 1000
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in Malaysia, Myanmar and Thailand
respectively
.

Afterwards. Cambodia was the
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only
country, which was the
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of
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elephants
increased in 2004 year around 1400
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elephants
. Chine had the least
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number
of
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elephants
a thousand
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and the decreased to half of that in seven years.
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IELTS academic The table depicts the data about the quantity of Asia elephants in 9 countries over the period 1997 to 2004

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