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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the main reason's working home males and females in 2019, the table compared men and women' s working hours per week the same year.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the main reason's working home males and females in 2019, the table compared men and women' s working hours per week the same year. Overall, both ladies and gentlemen prefer to work at home to save more money at around 45% and 42% respectively. The least agreeable reason the working home for males easier child care while women care about more men's about 6 times this situation. Moreover, women less prefer productive work than men around 11% females and 24% males in question. When we looking at more detail, the percentage of males who work at home over 30 hours per week at around 81%, although the proportion of females who hours of work per week under 10 74%. The table has given shows that women did not prefer to work at home over 10 hours while men preferred working at home for almost the whole week, over 30 hours in a week.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the main reason's working home males and females in 2019, the table compared men and women' s working hours per week the same year.

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