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The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.

The line graph gives information about the amount of spreads (margarine, low fat and reduced spreads, and butter) consumed over the period of 26years from 1981 to 2007. Overall, most people preferred butter and margarine in the earlier years. At the beginning, butter was more popular as compared to other spreads and this popularity was later replaced by margarine between the year 1991 to 2001. Low fat and reduced spread only started in 1996 and became the most patronized at the final years. More people purchased butter spread in the start and this rose to about 140grams in 1981 and reached its peak at 160grams and later declined sharply to 50grams in 2007. In contrast, margarine intake was at 90grams and fluctuates throughout the given years till it hit its lowest at 40grams in the last year. On the other hand, people only started consuming low fat and reduced spreads in 1996 when it first surfaced at approximately 10grams, and drastically increased to 80grams in 2001 and fell sightly to 70grams in 2007.
The line graph gives information about the amount of
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(margarine
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fat
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reduced
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spreads
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butter)
consumed over the period of 26years from 1981 to 2007.

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, most
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people
preferred
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butter
and
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margarine
in the earlier years. At the beginning,
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butter
was more popular as compared to other
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spreads
and this popularity was later replaced by
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margarine
between the
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year
1991 to 2001. Low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spread
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only
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started
in 1996 and became the most patronized at the final years.

More
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people
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purchased
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butter
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spread
in the
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start
and this rose to about
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140grams
in 1981 and reached its peak at
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160grams
and later declined
sharply
to
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50grams
in 2007.
In contrast
,
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margarine
intake was at
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90grams
and fluctuates throughout the
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given
years till it hit its lowest at
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40grams
in the last year.

On the other hand
,
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people
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only
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started
consuming low
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fat
and
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reduced
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spreads
in 1996 when it
first
surfaced at approximately
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10grams
, and
drastically
increased to
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80grams
in 2001 and fell
sightly
to
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70grams
in 2007.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007.

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