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the table compares and contrasts data on the changes in the number of tourists and the amount of their expenditures in the five highest ranking countries regarding the global tourism over a period of two successive years.

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the table compares and contrasts data on the changes in the number of tourists and the amount of their expenditures in the five highest ranking countries regarding the global tourism over a period of two successive years. It is clear that France was the most popular tourist destination in the period shown, and the United States earned by far the most revenue over the same period. In 2012, 83 million tourists had a chance to visit France, and the US was the second most visitedcountry, with 66. 7 million visits. China and Spain each received just under 58 million visitors, while Italy ranked fifth with 46 million ones. 2013 saw a rise of between 1 and 4 to each country, but an exception to this was China which received 2 million fewer visitors than the previous years. In the US maximum amount of tourist expenditure was recorded over $126 billion in 2012, while the minimum level was achieved for Italy of $41. 2 billion. In France, China, and Spain, the amount of money was between $50 billion and $56 billion in the same year. In 2013, even though the same pattern was obtained but the numbers are different, in which the US has the highest spending of under $140 billion, while the lowest number was about $44 billion. Over the same period, tourists devoted approximately 52, 56, and 60 billion dollars in China, France, and Spain, respectively.
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destination in the period shown, and the United States earned by far the most revenue
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visits. China and Spain each received
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under 58
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visitors, while Italy ranked fifth with 46
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ones. 2013
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fewer visitors than the previous years.

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IELTS academic the table compares and contrasts data on the changes in the number of tourists and the amount of their expenditures in the five highest ranking countries regarding the global tourism over a period of two successive years.

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