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The table chart depicts the information regarding the weekly consumption by age of dairy products of european countries.

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The table chart depicts the information regarding the weekly consumption by age of dairy products of european countries data has been calibrated into percentage. The table chart compares the percentage full fat and low fat fact of milk and butter. It is rapidly apparent that younger people consumers least, especially those under 25 age. Secondly, 26 to 45 people drink 1650 ml milk with full fat 20%. they is eating 10 gram butter which full fat is 38% and low fat is 62%. Shifting towards the second category that, old age people like to utilise milk and butter to 1670 ml, their milk contains 45% full fat and low fat is 55%. In addition, they uses to butter with 60 gram and the percentage of full fat and low fat butter 50%, that is more than other age groups. whereas, grey hair nations drinks 1900 ml milk which is higher consumption from younger and second age group. That milk contain 30% full fat and low fat 70%. respectively, octogenrain people eats only 30 gram butter, thats full 40% and low fat 51%. overall, younger people uses only 12 gram butter which is less than other age groups. In contrast to 19 gram for those who is from 26 to 45 and 60 gram and 30 gram for the two older groups in turn. younger individuals opt more fat 60% full and not low fat.
The table chart depicts the information regarding the weekly consumption by
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age
of dairy products of
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european
countries data has
been calibrated
into percentage. The table chart compares the percentage
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full
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fat
and
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low
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fat
fact of
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milk
and
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butter
. It is
rapidly
apparent that
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younger
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people
consumers least,
especially
those under 25
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age
.
Secondly
, 26 to 45
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people
drink 1650 ml
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milk
with
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full
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fat
20%.
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they
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is
eating 10
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gram
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butter
which
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full
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fat
is 38% and
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low
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fat
is 62%. Shifting towards the second category that,
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old
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age
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people
like to
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utilise
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milk
and
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butter
to 1670 ml, their
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milk
contains 45%
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full
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fat
and
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low
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fat
is 55%.
In addition
, they
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uses
to
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butter
with 60
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gram
and the percentage of
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full
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fat
and
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low
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fat
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butter
50%,
that is
more than other
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age
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groups
.
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whereas
,
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grey
hair nations drinks 1900 ml
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milk
which is higher consumption from
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younger
and second
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age
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group
. That
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milk
contain 30%
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full
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fat
and
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low
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fat
70%.
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respectively
,
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octogenrain
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people
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eats
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only
30
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gram
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butter
,
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thats
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full
40% and
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low
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fat
51%.
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overall
,
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younger
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people
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uses
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only
12
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gram
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butter
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age
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groups
.
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to 19
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gram
for those who is from 26 to 45 and 60
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gram
and 30
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gram
for the two older
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groups
in turn.
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younger
individuals opt more
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fat
60%
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full
and not
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low
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fat
.
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IELTS academic The table chart depicts the information regarding the weekly consumption by age of dairy products of european countries.

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