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The plans demonstrate the layout of a sports center belonging to a university at this time and the plan after renovation and expansion.

The plans demonstrate the layout of a sports center belonging to a university at this time and the plan after renovation and expansion. jbrOd
The plans demonstrate the layout of a sports center belonging to a university at this time and the plan after renovation and expansion. Overall, the central pool and its amenities will remain the way they are now, and outdoor courts will be demolished and converted into other facilities. In detail, the center’s entrance which is now located in the middle will remain the same in the future. In addition, in the future, the 25m pool and its surroundings such as changing room, seating area, reception, and gym will be kept, however, there will be a slight change in the size of the gym. Furthermore, the outdoor courts will be flattened and replaced by some amenities in the future. On the right side, two dance studios, a large changing room, and a small cafe will be added. On the left side, there will be another changing room as well, and also a shop which sells sports products. And the left top corner of the plan will be dedicated to a spacious pool for leisure.
The plans demonstrate the layout of a sports center belonging to a university at this time and the plan after renovation and expansion.

Overall
, the central pool and its amenities will remain the way they are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
, and outdoor courts will
be demolished
and converted into other facilities.

In detail, the center’s entrance which is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
located in the middle will remain the same in the future.
In addition
, in the future, the
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "25 m"
25m
pool and its surroundings such as changing room, seating area, reception, and gym will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
,
however
, there will be a slight
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
in the size of the gym.

Furthermore
, the outdoor courts will
be flattened
and replaced by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
amenities in the future. On the right side, two dance studios, a large changing room, and a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
. On the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
side, there will be another changing room
as well
, and
also
a shop which sells sports products. And the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
top corner of the plan will
be dedicated
to a spacious pool for leisure.
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IELTS academic The plans demonstrate the layout of a sports center belonging to a university at this time and the plan after renovation and expansion.

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