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Plans of zhabei high school in 1990 and 2010

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The given plan illustrates the information about Zhabei high school property in 1990 and 2010. In 1990, the plan was very simple. At the main entrance left side 4 classrooms and the end of the right side 4 basketball courts. Just cross the basketball courts one canteen and library were located and just over the basketball courts had one biology lab. The biology lab left side was located in three science labs. At the centre of the school, located one Gym. In 2010, basketball courts were only 2 and it was located on the bottom of the right side of the school. In another section of the plan has 2 apartments and between 2 apartments has shops. Just over the basketball courts has 2 different things, one of the rainwater tank and the other one is the recycling zone. This plan has 3 classrooms, and 2 biology labs and a chemistry lab. To sum up, in 2010 plan was differently changed than the 1990 plans.
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illustrates the information about
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Zhabei
high school property in 1990 and 2010.

In 1990, the
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was
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very
simple. At the main entrance
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left
side 4 classrooms and the
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end
of the right side 4
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basketball
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courts
.
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cross the
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basketball
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courts
one canteen and library were
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located
and
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just
over the
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basketball
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courts
had one biology
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lab
. The biology
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left
side was
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located
in three science
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labs
. At the
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centre
of the school,
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located
one Gym.

In 2010,
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basketball
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courts
were
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only
2 and it was
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located
on the bottom of the right side of the school. In another section of the
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plan
has 2 apartments and between 2 apartments has shops.
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over the
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basketball
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courts
has 2
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different
things, one of the rainwater tank and the other one is the recycling zone. This
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has 3 classrooms, and 2 biology
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labs
and a chemistry lab.

To sum up, in 2010
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was
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than the 1990
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