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The table below summarises data of book sales by a college bookshop for February 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given tables shows the information on different books sold by a college bookshop in the month of February 2000. Overall, magazines was sold the most among the others. According to the table, members of public and college in non-book club members preferred non- fiction over fiction. 41 of the fiction books were bought by the college staff. At the same time, the most sold books out of all was the magazines and it was mainly bought by the college students. Moving on to book club members, the highest books sold was the non-fiction which was 946. Interestingly, only 36 magazines where bought by the book club members when compared to other groups
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sold by a college bookshop in the month of February 2000.
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the most among the others. According to the table,
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of public and college in non-book club
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preferred non- fiction over fiction. 41 of the fiction
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by the college staff. At the same time, the most sold
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out of all was the magazines and it was
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by the college students.

Moving on to
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club
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, the highest
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sold was the non-fiction which was 946.
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,
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36 magazines where
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IELTS academic The table below summarises data of book sales by a college bookshop for February 2000.

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