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the pictures illustrates the changes in the town of Kimsville between 2002 and today

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The two maps describe the main changes which have taken place in the town of Kimsville between the year 2002 and today. In general, it appears that Kimsville was green with lots of trees, but now the town has been renewed in the direction of modernization and more human activities appear. One interesting change is that the trees on both the north-west and the south-west sides in the town of Kimsville has been cut down to make way for new apartments and football stadium respectively. Another striking change is that in the middle west side of town, a completely new train station has been constructed. If we look at the east side of Kimsville, facing with a new train station, the factory which is on the right side of city centre has been knocked down and software company has been built on these locations. A final interesting development is that old cinema has been converted into pub.
The two maps
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changes
which have taken place in the
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Kimsville
between the year 2002 and
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today
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In general
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Kimsville
was green with lots of trees,
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but
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now
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town
has
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One interesting
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change
is that the trees on both the north-west and the south-west
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sides
in the
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town
of
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Kimsville
has been
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cut
down to
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make
way for new apartments and football stadium
respectively
. Another striking
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change
is that in the middle west side of
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town
, a completely new train station has
been constructed
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If we look at the east side of
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Kimsville
, facing with a new train station, the factory which is on the right side of city
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centre
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been knocked
down and software
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has
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on these locations. A final interesting development is that
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cinema has
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IELTS academic the pictures illustrates the changes in the town of Kimsville between 2002 and today

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4 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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