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The diagram below how paper made and recycled. Summarise the information.

The diagram below how paper made and recycled. N37jg

The diagram illustrates the way in which paper is produced and following that recycled. Overall, the first process consists of five stages, beginning with plantation radiate pine thinnings and ending up with creating paper. The second step contains six actions starting with newspaper and therefore the paper. First of all, plantation radiate pine thinnings are harvested for paper manufacturing. After that, the wood is broken in a de-breaking drum and grind up to make logs which transferred to a chipper machine. Next, the chipped products are put in a thermomechanical refinder that utilises water. The product is then sent to a paper making machine. In the next stage, paper materials such as newspaper are collected in the form of the kerbside collection which is spun on a cone. Following this, The mass is de-inked with various liquids. The next step will be cleaning and fine screening before mixing it by recycled pulb in a thermomechanical device. Finally, the end product will send back to the paper making machine so that the cycle is repeated.

The diagram illustrates the way in which paper is produced
 and following that recycled.

Overall
, the first
 process consists of five stages, beginning with plantation radiate pine Possible spelling mistake found.thinning
thinnings
 and ending up with creating paper. The second step contains six actions starting with newspaper and therefore
 the paper.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, plantation radiate pine Possible spelling mistake found.thinning
thinnings
are harvested
 for paper manufacturing. After that, the wood is broken
 in a Possible spelling mistake found.breakingdecreasingdegreasinglawbreaking
de-breaking
 drum and grind up to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 logs which transferred to a chipper machine. Next
, the chipped products are put
 in a Possible spelling mistake found.
thermomechanical
Possible spelling mistake found.reminderrefiner
refinder
 that Possible spelling mistake. 'utilises' is British English.utilizes
utilises
 water. The product is then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to a paper making machine.

In the next
 stage, paper materials such as newspaper are collected
 in the form of the kerbside collection which is spun
 on a cone. Following this, The mass is Possible spelling mistake found.defineddebunkeddelinted
de-inked
 with various liquids. The next
 step will be cleaning and fine screening This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 mixing it by recycled Possible spelling mistake found.pubpullbulbpulppulePLB
pulb
 in a Possible spelling mistake found.
thermomechanical
 device. Finally
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 product will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 back to the paper making machine This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that the cycle is repeated
. 