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The table below shows us the quantity of exports being pass through Rotterdam port, between 2002 and 2012, and the amount of tax imposed on the goods at global destinations.

The table below shows us the quantity of exports being pass through Rotterdam port, between 2002 and 2012, and the amount of tax imposed on the goods at global destinations. lW2R1
The table below shows us the quantity of exports being pass through Rotterdam port, between 2002 and 2012, and the amount of tax imposed on the goods at global destinations. It is clear that, total exports increased slightly reach to 18600 million times in 2012. Despite the 'total' most of the destinations dropped in volume. For example, Europe the largest zone went down from 6900 million to 6400 million and the USA the second highest dreased to 4200 million to 3900 million. China dipped slightly to 2300 million and the Latin America fell to 1500. The “other” destinations are levelled off at 350 million. By contrast, Asia Pacific and Australia claimed to 2550 and 2300 receptively. Turning to taxation, we can clearly see that tax increased in all destinations that showed a decline in volumes, reach to 2% in the USA, China and Latin America, and in Europe it rose from 5% to 8%. The “other” zones unchanged at 2 % while the Asia Pacific and Australia reduced massively, from 5% to 2% and 4% to 1%.
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us the quantity of exports being pass through Rotterdam port, between 2002 and 2012, and the amount of tax imposed on the
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goods
at global destinations.

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that, total exports increased
slightly
reach to 18600
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times in 2012. Despite the 'total' most of the destinations dropped in volume.
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, Europe the largest zone went down from 6900
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to 6400
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and the USA the second highest
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to 4200
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to 3900
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. China dipped
slightly
to 2300
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and the Latin America fell to 1500. The “other” destinations
are levelled
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. By contrast, Asia Pacific and Australia claimed to 2550 and 2300
receptively
.

Turning to taxation, we can
clearly
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that tax increased in all destinations that
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a decline in volumes, reach to 2% in the USA, China and Latin America, and in Europe it rose from 5% to 8%. The “other” zones unchanged at 2 % while the Asia Pacific and Australia
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massively
, from 5% to 2% and 4% to 1%.
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IELTS academic The table below shows us the quantity of exports being pass through Rotterdam port, between 2002 and 2012, and the amount of tax imposed on the goods at global destinations.

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