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The table below shows the water usage for different purposes in six different countries in 2001.

The table below shows the water usage for different purposes in six different countries in 2001. X7G1O
The table illustrates the proportion of water used for three various sectors in six countries in 2001. Overall, the amount of water consumed for agricultural water was highest in the total of three sectors. it can be seen that Australia and Canada used the highest water in Domestic water usage with 341m3 and 279m3 respectively. Next, come Russia and Turkey, which accounted for 98 and 80. The figure lowest belongs to china and UK, according to 26 and 83m3 in 2001. Turning to the remaining sector, 1, 663m3 of water used in Russia was on Agricultural water usage. Meanwhile, in Canada and Turkey people consumed was slightly lower about 1, 238 and 1, 462m3. In the same years, three other countries were just only over from 700m3 to 800. Finally, 532m3 of water was used for the industry by Canadians, gained the greatest number whereas China as well as Turkey the smallest. On the other hand, Canada and United Kingdom’s industrial water usage was 275 and 398m3 while only 96m3 of water was used by Russian.
The table illustrates the proportion of
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for three various sectors in six countries in 2001.

Overall
, the amount of
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consumed for agricultural
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was highest in the total of three sectors.

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that Australia and Canada
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the highest
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in Domestic
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usage with 341m3 and 279m3
respectively
.
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Russia and Turkey, which accounted for 98 and 80. The figure lowest belongs to
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china
and UK, according to 26 and 83m3 in 2001.

Turning to the remaining sector, 1, 663m3 of
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in Russia was on Agricultural
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usage. Meanwhile, in Canada and Turkey
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consumed was
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lower about 1, 238 and 1, 462m3. In the same years, three other countries were
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over from 700m3 to 800.
Finally
, 532m3 of
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was
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for the industry by Canadians, gained the greatest number whereas China
as well
as Turkey the smallest.
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, Canada and United Kingdom’s industrial
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usage was 275 and 398m3 while
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96m3 of
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by Russian.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the water usage for different purposes in six different countries in 2001.

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