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The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.

The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months. GVLL
The table illustrates the results of debriefing undertaken in Scotland with adults aged from 16 to 74 to assess their participation in a variety of cultural activities over a 12-month period. Overall, it is clear that participation in any performance and crafts were the most popular for all age groups. The highest results in any activities was seen in the 16-24 age group, with 35% and 30% accordingly doing performance and visual arts. In contrast, other activities were much lower, particularly those computer-based, at only 10%. And when it comes to the older age groups, like under the 25, the highest participation rate seen for 25-44 years was in performance, though this was much lower, at only 22%. And similar rate was for the most popular activity for the 45-74 age group, which was crafts about 22%. Turning to the all age groups, it is clear that performance and crafts were the most popular, at over 19% whereas cultural purchases and visual arts were less popular about 16% and 15%. Finally, a little interest was shown in writing and computing.
The table illustrates the results of debriefing undertaken in Scotland with adults aged from 16 to 74 to assess their participation in a variety of cultural
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IELTS academic The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.

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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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