Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The table below shows the result of a survey to find out the what members of city club think about the club activity facilities and opening hours

The table below shows the result of a survey to find out the what members of city club think about the club activity facilities and opening hours PBaj
The given tabular chart illustrates the information about the a survey conducted on male and female of members regarding the club activities facilities and opening hours. Range of activities is divided into three different parts. Overview, majority of the ratio of both genders are very satisfied with the service of the City sports club regarding activities facility and opening hours. The stricking feature of the tablet chart is that, 72% of the women were very satisfied with the opening hours of the City sports club. 25% female were not happy with opening hours. However, male members were not happy with opening hours that was accounted only 45%. It was declined 7% who are not satisfied with the opening period time period. Club facilities both female and male are enjoyed with most of the time with equal proportion very satisfied 64% and 63% and not satisfied with 14 and 10% respectively. Only 35% women were think about the club activities are very satisfied and same proportion was followed by satisfied group of people men were very satisfied with the City sports club that was 55% however that data was declined and reached at 5%.
The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
tabular chart illustrates the information about
Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "a" is left.
the a
survey conducted on male and female of members regarding the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
activities
facilities and opening
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hours
. Range of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
activities
is divided
into three
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
parts.

Overview,
It seems that an article is missing.
majority of
the ratio of both genders are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
satisfied
with the service of the City sports
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
regarding
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
activities
facility and opening hours.

The
Possible spelling mistake found.
stricking
feature of the tablet chart is that, 72% of the women were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
satisfied
with the opening
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hours
of the City sports
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
. 25% female were not happy with opening
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hours
.
However
, male members were not happy with opening
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hours
that
was accounted
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
45%. It
was declined
7% who are not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
satisfied
with the opening period time period.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Club
facilities both female and male
are enjoyed
with most of the time with equal proportion
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
satisfied
64% and 63% and not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
satisfied
with 14 and 10%
respectively
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Only
35% women were
Consider using a past participle here: "thought".
think
about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
activities
are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
satisfied
and same proportion
was followed
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
satisfied
group of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
men
were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
satisfied
with the City sports
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
that was 55%
however
that data
was declined
and reached at 5%.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The table below shows the result of a survey to find out the what members of city club think about the club activity facilities and opening hours

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The table below shows the result of a survey to find out the what members of city club think about the club activity facilities and opening hours