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The table below shows the primary funding sources of international students in the US during the years 2003/04 and 2013/14.

The table below shows the primary funding sources of international students in the US during the years 2003/04 and 2013/14. OVOlk
The given table informs us about the main source of financial support of international students in the U. S during 2003/04 and 2013/14. In general, we can see that in both periods given, personal and family are the highest primary source of funding. On the contrary, current employer is the lowest source of funding in 2003/04, while other sources are the lowest that happened in 2013/14 In 2003/04, there were 385, 543 students that depended on the personal and family funding while in 2013/14 there were 574, 129 students. By that, there were 49% change from 2003/04 to 2013/14. As for the foreign government or university and current employer fund showed the same proportion. However, the number of students funded by the foreign government and universities surpassed the current employer by approximately four thousand students as there were only 10, 111 current employers. From 2003/04 to 2013/14, all the sources of fundings were increased, except for the other source which declined by 14%. In 2003/04 there were 29, 141 students with other sources of financial support only to fell for around four thousands of students in 2013/14.
The
given
table informs us about the main
source
of financial support of international
students
in the U. S during 2003/04 and 2013/14.
In general
, we can
see
that in both periods
given
, personal and family are the highest primary
source
of
funding
.
On the contrary
,
current
employer is the lowest
source
of
funding
in 2003/04, while other
sources
are the lowest that happened in 2013/14

In 2003/04, there were 385, 543
students
that depended on the personal and family
funding
while in 2013/14 there were 574, 129
students
. By that, there were 49%
change
from 2003/04
to 2013/14. As for the foreign
government
or university and
current
employer fund
showed
the same proportion.
However
, the number of
students
funded by the foreign
government
and universities surpassed the
current
employer by approximately four thousand
students
as there were
only
10, 111
current
employers.

From 2003/04
to 2013/14, all the
sources
of
fundings
were increased
,
except for
the other
source
which declined by 14%. In 2003/04 there were 29, 141
students
with other
sources
of financial support
only
to fell for around
four thousands of
students
in 2013/14.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the primary funding sources of international students in the US during the years 2003/04 and 2013/14.

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