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The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. 61DG
The table represents data about the usage of four different sources producing electricity, measured in percentage, in five Asia countries, namely Malaysia, Singapore, Thailand, South Korea and Japan in 2005. Taking nuclear first, Japan had the highest percentage just under a half. Then South Korea sources leaded with 33%. In contrast Thailand did not used any nuclear. Turning to the coal and ignite, it was mostly used fuel in two countries, Malaysia and Singapore. Malaysia used the largest proportion to produce its electricity at 61%, while Singapore generated 42% energy from coal and ignite. By looking at petroleum products it can be seen that they are used by Thailand for creating 36% energy. In contrast, other countries used a very small proportion of petroleum. Another one, hydro and wind power were used for 48% and 19% in South Korea and Thailand respectively. Other countries namely Malaysia, Singapore and Japan generated less that 5% energy using wind and water. In addition, significant amount of electricity has produced from other sources. Singapore, Japan and Thailand created around 40% of their electricity from the fuel. To sum up, none of countries have depended on the same fuel resource.
The table represents data about the usage of four
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sources producing
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electricity
, measured in percentage, in five Asia
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countries
,
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Malaysia, Singapore, Thailand, South Korea and
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Japan
in 2005.

Taking nuclear
first
,
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Japan
had the highest percentage
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just
under a half. Then South Korea sources leaded with 33%. In
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contrast
Thailand did not
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used
any nuclear. Turning to the coal and ignite, it was
mostly
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used
fuel in two
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countries
, Malaysia and Singapore. Malaysia
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used
the largest proportion to produce its
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electricity
at 61%, while Singapore generated 42% energy from coal and ignite. By looking at petroleum products it can be
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that they are
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used
by Thailand for creating 36% energy.
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, other
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countries
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small
proportion of petroleum. Another one, hydro and wind power were
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used
for 48% and 19% in South Korea and Thailand
respectively
. Other
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countries
namely
Malaysia, Singapore and
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Japan
generated less that 5% energy using wind and water.
In addition
, significant amount of
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electricity
has produced from other sources. Singapore,
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Japan
and Thailand created around 40% of their
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electricity
from the fuel.

To sum up, none of
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countries
have depended on the same fuel resource.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005.

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