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The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. agM7
The picture displays the which type of cutting tools were used in the Stone Age. Tool A is developes 1. 4 millon years ago and Tool B is developed 0. 8 million years ago. Front view, side view and back view of the tools has been display in the picture and the tool is 5 cm long. The front view and back view of Tool B are completely different from Tool A. There is a huge difference in the side view of the tools. Tool B has become more slimer than the Tool A. Tool B has become sharper and it is more refined than Tool A which has been developed 1. 4 million years ago. The height has been remained same and there is no difference in the centimeters(cm).
The picture displays the which type of cutting
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A is
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1. 4
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, side
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and back
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of the
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has been display in the picture and the
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5 cm long.

The front
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and back
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of
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B are completely
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A. There is a huge difference in the side
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.
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B has become more
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slimer
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Tool B has become sharper and it is more refined than
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A which has
been developed
1. 4 million years ago. The height has
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age.

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130 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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