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The bar chart shows the components of gdp in the uk between 1992and 2000.

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The bar chart depicts data regarding elements of gdp in the uk frrom 1992 and 2000. Overall, it is evident that IT industry showed the variation in gdp of uk over time. but the figure of IT industry was increasing in 2000, while the service industry rose in given period of time. Getting into details, in 1992, above 6%of gdp growth in IT industry, whereas, 4% of gross domestic product from by IT industry was observed as 8% in 1996, although the service industry of gdp grew by 1%in same year Probing furthe, the percentage of gdp form IT industry inclined by 2%in 1998, however the figure of service industry rose to approximately 8%. Following this, the maximum industry of GDP had significantly increase at above 14%in 2000. Conversely, in 2000, the proportion of gdp by service industry increased to 8%.
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uk
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gdp
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the figure of IT
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industry
was increasing in 2000, while the
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service
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industry
rose in
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period of time. Getting into
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details
, in 1992, above 6%of
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gdp
growth in IT
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industry
, whereas, 4% of gross domestic product from by IT
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industry
was observed
as 8% in 1996, although the
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service
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industry
of
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gdp
grew by 1%in same year Probing
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furthe
, the percentage of
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gdp
form IT
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industry
inclined by 2%in 1998,
however
the figure of
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service
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industry
rose to approximately 8%. Following this, the maximum
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industry
of GDP had
significantly
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increase
at above 14%in 2000.
Conversely
, in 2000, the proportion of
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by
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service
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increased to 8%.
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