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The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015. OQO3
The table illustrates the percentage of women participated in senior management positions in three companies from 1975 to 2015. Overall, the company in which highest percentage of women participated was on Eldan Ltd. The lowest percentage of women participated in Eldan Ltd, Bamforth Ltd and Finsbury Ltd is 3%, 9% and 14% respectively. The highest participation percentage of women in Eldan Ltd is 64% in 2015, whilst the lowest percentage is 3% in 1975. There was an upsurge in participation during 1975 and 2015. Highest and lowest percentage recorded in Bamforth Ltd is 46% and 9% respectively. There was a rise in participation starting from 1975 to 2015. The participation percentage in Finsbury Ltd fluctuates. In 1975 it started with 16% and then decreases to 14% in 1980 and upsurge is observed till 1990 and plummeted in 2000 with 20%. The highest recorded percentage in Finsbury Ltd is 26%. From 1975 to 1990, Finsbury Ltd has large numbers of participation. Moreover, from 1990 to 2015 that place was occupied by EldanLtd.
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is 3% in 1975. There was an upsurge in
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during 1975 and 2015. Highest and lowest
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Bamforth
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Finsbury
Ltd is 26%.

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IELTS academic The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015.

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