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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1 https://iotcdn.oss-ap-southeast-1.aliyuncs.com/2018-06/mt2017jan-pt2-1.png

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. 31qd

The graph shows change in the number of UK travellers for everyday by using different three types vehicles between the year of 1970 and 2030. There is change in millions number of people from the year of 1070 to 2030. The given data shows travelling by car, bus and train for two specific years. firstly, if we analyse the cronograph, we will see that the number of car and train users were increased as we look from the year of 1970 to 2030. However, number of individuals using bus was decreased slowly from the past year. As we noticed that number of car and train users inclined sharply as we reach to year 2030. If we moved on 1970, the number of car users were high(arround 6 millions) as compare to Bus and Train users which is also maximum in 2030 but the Train users in 1970 were less than 3 million in last position as compare with other two vehicles where as it reaches to more than 5 millions in 2030 with second number of vehicle used by UK commuters. And the number of bus traveller was in second position in 1970 which declined to third position in 2030. So, the number of individuals travelling by car and train is increased from 1970 to 2030 and the number of Bus traveller are decreased from the year of 1970 to 2030.

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